Tuesday, June 9, 2009

New Story, But The Same Story...

You now that I posted a teaser on our blog, right? I decided that I would not write that part of the story. I am kind of changing it. Sir Gavin is not the main character. That was kind of an introduction. Yep, it is changed. Here is another teaser that I am going to keep. Enjoy...


Sir Charles Heartman watched as Sir Gavin suddenly vanished, his face shinning. But only Charles knew what had happened. The King had called him home. Charles had meet the King, long ago. The King had told him to never fight Sir Jaller Breakheart and when Gavin said he would fight him, Charles had felt sick. But he was glad that the King had chosen to bring Gavin home...


There you go. New Story, But The Same Story. Hope you like it.

6 comments:

  1. I like it all the more, Hayley! Jaller...hmmm...sounds familiar.

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  2. I know it is a bionicle name, but I thought that it would sound neat for a bad guy name.

    Hayley

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  3. It's a great name, Hayley! It sounds so...badguyish.

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  4. Yeah, right. It sounds so badguyish... really?

    Hayley

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  5. Really. I couldn't have thought of a better badguyish name!

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  6. Yeah... right. You could'nt of thought of a better badguyish name. You can make up the most wonderful badguyish name's.

    Hayley

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